Attempted to write a 100 word flash fiction in dark genre for the first time. Would be grateful for your feedback, positive or negative.
'Don't worry Amma, you take father to the hospital. I will transfer money tonight itself', Amma's strong girl assured her.
That year incessant rains had taken away even the dilapidated roof from their heads and ruined their flourishing crops. Uma-family's only hope for survival had moved to the city in search of a job.
Trriinnnggg...her smartphone buzzed.
Putting on the headphones the pretty girl switched the webcam on. It's time to wear the mask and become an uninhibited Pretty Woman.
'Hello...welcome to Tammy's den', adjusting the light away from her face, she drawled seductively.