The Snowflake
I have attempted Etheree style of poetry before. An Etheree poem has as many syllables in a line as is its number. For examples the first line would have just one syllable, the second with two syllables, the third would have three and so on.
Today it's a double Etheree which means that half of the poem is a straight Etheree and the second half is reverse Etheree.
Storm,
it's here,
stealthily
baring its fangs.
I could have braved it
if you had stood by me,
adorned myself with the stars
worn the half moon as a necklace.
But you chose to be a fragile leaf,
quivering even before the soft breeze.
You retreated like the high tide in sea.
The shadows darkened, swallowing me,
I could have braved them, undaunted
by the menacing abyss.
But you melted away
like a frail snowflake
perched on a leaf
in the wild
wailing
woods.
Today it's a double Etheree which means that half of the poem is a straight Etheree and the second half is reverse Etheree.
Storm,
it's here,
stealthily
baring its fangs.
I could have braved it
if you had stood by me,
adorned myself with the stars
worn the half moon as a necklace.
But you chose to be a fragile leaf,
quivering even before the soft breeze.
You retreated like the high tide in sea.
The shadows darkened, swallowing me,
I could have braved them, undaunted
by the menacing abyss.
But you melted away
like a frail snowflake
perched on a leaf
in the wild
wailing
woods.
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